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	<title>Comments on: Profane Halo</title>
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		<title>By: Mike</title>
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		<dc:creator>Mike</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 10 Oct 2008 05:53:33 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Paula, harketh, a larketh , in the parketh, replied marketh, near a dead carcass. Man, poems are easy. my stream of consciousness, revolves around a state of un-consciousness, evolved from my upbringing in Chippewa Falls. through which a person, drinks him-or-herself in too a state of inebriated bliss. I.m glad , you guys in Ca. have everthing figured out. Mike P.S what does your Utopia feel and look like?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Paula, harketh, a larketh , in the parketh, replied marketh, near a dead carcass. Man, poems are easy. my stream of consciousness, revolves around a state of un-consciousness, evolved from my upbringing in Chippewa Falls. through which a person, drinks him-or-herself in too a state of inebriated bliss. I.m glad , you guys in Ca. have everthing figured out. Mike P.S what does your Utopia feel and look like?</p>
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		<title>By: Stefanie Marlis</title>
		<link>http://www.constantcritic.com/jordan_davis/profane_halo/comment-page-1/#comment-44</link>
		<dc:creator>Stefanie Marlis</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 30 Nov 2005 18:22:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I want to tap Jordan Davis on the shoulder and remind him of the sweeping movement that has taken place in poetry over the last couple of decades: it is one whereby language has been beautifully reborn. Connoley&#039;s work honors a language that seeps into the soul with unexpected, unparalleled freshness, and with more clarity, unlike Davis&#039;s review, than clutter.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I want to tap Jordan Davis on the shoulder and remind him of the sweeping movement that has taken place in poetry over the last couple of decades: it is one whereby language has been beautifully reborn. Connoley&#8217;s work honors a language that seeps into the soul with unexpected, unparalleled freshness, and with more clarity, unlike Davis&#8217;s review, than clutter.</p>
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		<title>By: brian watson</title>
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		<dc:creator>brian watson</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 20 Nov 2005 22:13:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>sort of fun for the jordan davis part and the &#039;review as poem&#039; bit but a metaconscious apology (&quot;i know there&#039;s too much me in this&quot;) isn&#039;t as useful as recognizing that in the first place and trimming it down. &lt;br&gt;
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the few critical points that are made seem fair (nice images but too little clarity and personality, as i gather them) but the review does too little to contextualize itself and spends too much time on a false nostalgia that&#039;s pretty useless to this reader. to say conoley &quot;lived through the theory wars&quot; seems a lot like saying &quot;good thing colonialism&#039;s over with! now we can reminisce.&quot; &lt;br&gt;
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 i know again the m.o. of the review is all tongue-in-cheek, but if the reviewer is supposed to be somehow engaging in a dialogue with the poet it would be nice if the poet were actually allowed a word here &amp; there to make her own case. if i hadn&#039;t seen gillian read recently i would have no fucking clue whether i had any interest in seeing her work based on this piece. &lt;br&gt;
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which isn&#039;t to say i don&#039;t like jordan davis, because he&#039;s funny &amp; i do. all i&#039;m suggesting is that there must be a way to make it hilarious and energetic and davis-y and still functional as a review, mustn&#039;t there? contrary to what many might think, maybe jordan&#039;s not trying hard enough?  </description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>sort of fun for the jordan davis part and the &#8216;review as poem&#8217; bit but a metaconscious apology (&#8220;i know there&#8217;s too much me in this&#8221;) isn&#8217;t as useful as recognizing that in the first place and trimming it down. </p>
<p>the few critical points that are made seem fair (nice images but too little clarity and personality, as i gather them) but the review does too little to contextualize itself and spends too much time on a false nostalgia that&#8217;s pretty useless to this reader. to say conoley &#8220;lived through the theory wars&#8221; seems a lot like saying &#8220;good thing colonialism&#8217;s over with! now we can reminisce.&#8221; </p>
<p> i know again the m.o. of the review is all tongue-in-cheek, but if the reviewer is supposed to be somehow engaging in a dialogue with the poet it would be nice if the poet were actually allowed a word here &#038; there to make her own case. if i hadn&#8217;t seen gillian read recently i would have no fucking clue whether i had any interest in seeing her work based on this piece. </p>
<p>which isn&#8217;t to say i don&#8217;t like jordan davis, because he&#8217;s funny &#038; i do. all i&#8217;m suggesting is that there must be a way to make it hilarious and energetic and davis-y and still functional as a review, mustn&#8217;t there? contrary to what many might think, maybe jordan&#8217;s not trying hard enough?</p>
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		<title>By: Paula Koneazny</title>
		<link>http://www.constantcritic.com/jordan_davis/profane_halo/comment-page-1/#comment-42</link>
		<dc:creator>Paula Koneazny</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 09 Aug 2005 23:28:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I much enjoyed Jordon Davis&#039;s stream-of-consciousness rant cum review. However, he&#039;s being truthful when he admits that his review is way more about him than about Conoley&#039;s Profane Halo.  Perhaps also not helpful to compare PH to Some Gangster Pain while ignoring all the poems Conoley has written in between.  Davis&#039;s piece works well as a prose poem itself but not so great as an actual review, which might have given readers at least some inkling as to what the heck Conoley&#039;s book is up to. </description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I much enjoyed Jordon Davis&#8217;s stream-of-consciousness rant cum review. However, he&#8217;s being truthful when he admits that his review is way more about him than about Conoley&#8217;s Profane Halo.  Perhaps also not helpful to compare PH to Some Gangster Pain while ignoring all the poems Conoley has written in between.  Davis&#8217;s piece works well as a prose poem itself but not so great as an actual review, which might have given readers at least some inkling as to what the heck Conoley&#8217;s book is up to.</p>
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		<title>By: Nick Piombino</title>
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		<dc:creator>Nick Piombino</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 29 Jul 2005 14:55:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Jordan Davis&#039; criticism makes me realize&lt;br&gt;
how much I miss seeing articles by writers&lt;br&gt;
like Jill Johnston in the Village Voice in the 70&#039;s. I enjoyed this.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Jordan Davis&#8217; criticism makes me realize<br />
how much I miss seeing articles by writers<br />
like Jill Johnston in the Village Voice in the 70&#8242;s. I enjoyed this.</p>
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